Hard-Edge Planet
In our previous post, Democracy Is a Love Affair, we asserted that democracy begins not in systems or procedures, but in the heart — in love, empathy, dignity, and the willingness to see no one as disposable.
(https://alanjamesstrachan.substack.com/p/democracy-is-a-love-affair)
In Janet’s poem, Hard-Edge Planet, we turn from that vision to the bruising conditions that test it. On a planet full of sharp corners, collisions, cruelty, and strongly defended selves, tenderness can seem naïve, even impossible.
Yet this poem insists otherwise: the harder the world becomes, the more urgently we need kindness, softness, and “collective love” in order to thrive.
Hard-Edge Planet is an invitation to imagine what it would mean to meet a brutal world not with more armor, but with deeper devotion.
Hard-Edge Planet Included in the deal of living on a hard-edge planet, is the part about invariably getting hurt. Bumping ‘round ninety-degree corners, impossible angles, battered by countless protrusions, geologic and human, we hurl along marathon paths, crushing, crashing, provoking harm with personal edges — inner blocks and barricades, hurdles erected for safety and defense. In this land where objects are much closer than they appear, where bumper cars, smash-dancing, fight clubs, and TV coliseums are familiar wreckage (the things we do for fun) there is no getting off easy, no respite from the daily mosh pit of close encounters without closeness. The less we feel, the harder we hit. Where is our drive for overdoses of kindness, a currency of compassion? Is there such a thing? Or do I only imagine it as I feel the pounding of my naked human heart rounding a sharp bend and colliding with yours? An empire’s commerce — its curse — is cruelty. With predatory talons it circles high above, scratches from within — clenching, clawing each soul’s sinew — emptiness gnawing on the bones of existence. We have come to worship the pageantry of intractable insistence, impenetrable fortresses, endless kabuki moves of ritualized resistance and antagonist relics of ghosts gone by … even while watercolor palettes, those fluid hues and halos by which we first arrive, those bondings and ever-bending rainbows that bless our first and final footfalls, still surface with promises that human spirits are wonders indestructible. Wouldn’t it be better, wiser, more amazing, to shine our rainbow light indulgently upon each other’s souls; to twine ourselves together with green and lacing vines of constancy and tenderness? I need your love. I’ve said it plain and true. And I am counting on you needing mine too. Let us strive to build soft bowers of collective love. Let us plant winding thickets of conspiratorial devotion, so, when the hard hits do come along, or catch us unaware, we will have cultivated downy souls and shared round nests from which to navigate — and even — to welcome them.



Great poem, Janet! And nice introduction, Alan.
"there is no getting off easy,
no respite
from the daily mosh pit
of close encounters
without closeness."
I loved the wistful call for "downy souls."
Wow thank you for creating and sharing this gorgeous poem. Profound. Im thinking about a loved one in my life. As he said to me today -Gen Z had to become numb. He sees his generation Gen Z as the first to have access to everything online and he says the online bad is very bad.